Watermelon
“Mm mm” the whole class said even koby but
you will see his reason
later. The slippery juicy slides down the flesh of
the watermelon
I look at the beautiful patons on the watermelon
I feel the slimy flesh and the patons had dark green
spots
on its bottom, I saw seeds they looked as black
as midnight.
The super slimy seeds got shot around in my
hand I bite into it the color was
green and red. My friend Koby
did not like it, Koby said
“it was way to mushy” I think he
got unlucky my one was good,
most of the class liked it but
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