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Friday, June 7, 2019

persimmon slow writing

Persimmons Writing

Persimmons taste like  walnuts.
  crunchy hard round persimmons.
perfect  powerful person.
 did you know that persimmons were frist growing in China?
persimmons is so yummy!
  The juicy crunchy persimmon in my mouth.
 giving my body the vitamins, minerals, and fibre it needs.

By Connor

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2 comments:

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